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The echos of WAR stain my mind.
The innocents that will die.
The murderers that won't cry.
The souls that will never return.

The echos of WAR stain my mind.

The old saying comes to mind:
FOLLOW THE LEADER OR QUESTION WHY?
©2003-2009 ~happymage
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It took me a few short minutes to write this poem while presenting a project at school about war.

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:iconraun:
Very nice and straight to the point poetry. I dont read much poetry, mainly because poets seem to search for hours for big pompous words and construct sentences which could have been said much simpler and with much more clarity LOL call me square ;-) (Wink)
Your 10 minute poem is very clear. Exactly my thoughts on the current political scene, where the glorious leader USA sets off in a (most of the time mad direction) and then the rest of the "free" world follow suit.
Thumbs Up Peace
:icontana-chan:
Wow that is deep.
:icontana-chan:
Wow that is deep. Very well written and yes, straight to the point. It's very powerful in my openion.
:iconpassenger-nq:
very nice poem. good use of capitals for "war" and for the last verse. A great message this poem transmits.
:iconconfexion:
brilliant. and it all ties up very nicely. very straight to the point as well.
:iconvansh:
nice one KUZCO!!
:iconhalogen7:
short, but very powerful. excellent job. :+fav:

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